Curse
1 INT.
HOME
Fade in:
We can see a man
is doing something strange. The light is very dark. He is writing some Taoist
magic figures, to burn incense, praying on his lips...
2 INT.
HOTEL
A big bed in the
middle of hotel’s room. The man is sitting at the foot of the bed and smoking.
We can see a woman(call her S below) behind him, lay on the bed, wrapped in a
quilt, looks very sluggish.
3 EXT.
STREET(OUTSIDE OF THE HOTEL)
The man and S walk
out of the hotel. We can see them from far away. Man’s hand put on S’s
posterior, looks very intimate. He is saying something to S, but we can’t hear
that. Then the man pats S lightly, they separate.
4 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
Man’s girl friend
(call her N below) is sitting on the sofa and watching TV. Actually, she is
absentminded.
At this time, man
is back. He walks to the fridge and takes a bottle of beer. Then he sits beside
N, drinks the beer and watches TV.
N (still watch on
TV, looks deadpan): Where are you going this morning?
Man: GYM.
N: GYM? I guess
you have some exercises on somebody’s bed, am
I right? Why don’t you fuck her in my house? Fuck you! You
bastard! How dare you lie to me? (when N curse the man, he just drinks the
beer, didn’t say anything)
When the man
finishes his drink, he stands up and leaves the drawing room.
Man: Don’t forget
to cook later.
N (suddenly stand
up): Go to eat your ass!
5 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
The man holds a
bloodied knife, and put it into a bowl of water. Strange thing is the knife
stand in the water. We can see a taoist magic figure beside the bowl.
Then, the man
lights 4 candles in front of the bowl. After that, he burns incense and says
something we can understand. Suddenly, he stops praying and open his eyes. 4
candles extinguish at the same time.
The man put some
ash into the bowl, and then he holds the knife and takes it out of the bowl. We
can see a spookiest smile on his face.
6 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
N is cooking in
the kitchen. She hears the man is back.
The man walks into
the room, looks very strange.
N even doesn’t
look up, start cursing: Come back so late again! Fuck! You’re a pig that just
knows how to eat and fuck bitches! Why are you coming back? Why don’t you live
in that bitch’s home?
N curses a lot
while she is cooking. She doesn’t notices the man already stand behind her.
Unexpectedly, the man stabbed a knife in her back. We can see the knife
penetrate her body, shed blood like water. N stops talking this time, she looks
very suffering, but she can’t sound any voices.The man is deadpan this time.
Fade out
7 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
Fade in:
N has been put
beside the sofa.
Man is still doing
his ritual. He drinks the water in the bowl, and spews all the water to the
taoist magic figure. Then, he walks to N’s body, and put the taoist magic
figure on her wound. He starts to pray for something, the taoist magic figure
slowly disappearing.
Man: Don’t forget
to cook later.
Suddenly, N’s body
became squirm. She stands up slowly. We can’t see any emotion on her face. She
just walks to the kitchen, doesn’t say anything.
8 EXT.
STREET(OUTSIDE OF THE HOTEL)
Flashback: ( back
to no.3 scene )
The man and S walk
out of the hotel. We can see them, in a very close place.
Man’s hand put on
S’s posterior, looks very intimate. Actually, he put a taoist magic figure on
her back.
He is saying
something to S. Actually, he is praying.
Then the man pats
S lightly, the taoist magic figure has disappeared.
Man: Go back to
your home.
They separate.
Fade out.
The end.
Karma(second draft)
1 INT.
HOME
Fade in:
We can see a man
is doing something strange. The light is very dark. He is writing some Taoist
magic figures, to burn incense, praying on his lips...
2 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
The man walks into
the drawing room. He dresses a suit, looks very tired. Woman sits in the sofa
and looks ahead. She looks lifeless.
Man: It’s too busy
today. Ah, I’m so tired!
Man walks to the
sofa and crouch down.
Man:
Sophie(slowly, lightly), cooking, please.
Woman nods, and
stands up walks to the kitchen. This time, we can see a special radio on the
desk in front of the sofa.
After a while,
dinner is finished. The man already sits behind table and eats. Woman put the
last dish on the table, then stand behind the table.
Man: It’s
delicious! (look at the woman) Sit.
Woman nods, sit
down.
Man:(while he is
eating) Sophie, are you OK?
Woman looks at the
man, doesn’t say anything.
Man: Say: Yes.
Please.
Woman: Yes,
please.
Man:(continue
eating) Don’t forget clean the room later.
3 INT.
BEDROOM
Woman is cleaning
the kitchen.
Man sleeps in the
bedroom, he looks very unpeaceful, just like he has a nightmare.
This time, we can
see woman’s feet walk into the bedroom slowly.
Suddenly, the man
opens his eyes, looks very scared. He notices the woman is standing behind the
bed. She holds a knife and looks at him. Woman still very lifeless, but she
raises the knife in her hand and stab it to him!
Man screeches.
Suddenly, he sits up on the bed. He finds this is just a nightmare. He gasps
and recalls something...
4 INT.
KITCHEN (MEMORY)
Woman is tidying
the kitchen. She looks very angry, she says a lot of swear words to man. Man is
standing behind the desk.
Man: Why you
always talking, talking, talking! I don’t love you anymore! You will be my
sweet doll, shut up! Shut up!
He already can’t
bear woman’s talk endlessly, so he takes a knife and walk beside the woman.
Unexpectedly, the man stabbed a knife in her back. We can see the knife
penetrate her body, shed blood like water. N stops talking this time, she looks
very suffering, but she can’t sound any voices. After her death, he moves her
body to the sofa.
He walks to the
table and becomes to do Chinese traditional sorcery. He is writing some taoist
magic figures, to burn incense, praying on his lips...
Man: You will
listen to me now. You will follow my order forever!
Then, he walks to
N’s body, and put the taoist magic figure on her wound. He starts to pray for
something, the taoist magic figure slowly disappearing.
5 INT.
BEDROOM & DRAWING ROOM
Man stops to
recall, he still sits on the bed. He looks up this time, suddenly, he watches
the woman is standing outside! He is very scared and angry! He stands up and
walks out, slaps on her face.
Man: Never stand
here again! Now, go to sit on the sofa!
Woman nods. Man
goes back to the room, and the woman walks to the sofa. When she sits down, she
knocks the radio heedless. The radio starts broadcast...
6 INT.
KITCHEN (FLASHBACK)
Man and woman sit
behind the table together. They looks very sweet.
Woman: I’m so
scared. I’m scared if you don’t love me.
Man: Don’t worry,
baby. If I don’t love you, you can just cut off my head!
Woman: Wait! I
need to record this. Say again!
7 INT.
DRAWING ROOM
Radio: If I don’t
love you, you can just cut off my head!
Woman sits on the
sofa, when she hears this sentence, she nods.
Then, she stands
up and walks to the kitchen. She takes a knife, walks into the bedroom...
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